The sun was blotted out, turning the day into night. The earth shook and rumbled. The sky was ripped by shattering thunder. Away in the city the temple curtain, a foot-thick wall of cloth, was ripped from top to bottom. The old covenant had passed away. A new one took its place. It was finished.
yes. the Jesus figure and sign stand out. but i actually really like the 'collage' feel that the "out of place"ness give the piece. i think it makes it look different than your run-of-the-mill photo-calendar lookin images. so yea. basically i think this is just beautiful. beautiful subject matter. beautiful execution
A few things here that bother me.
The Idea of a somewhat modern christ is very nice, However it seems to stick out from the picture. As if it didn't belong. Maybe it's a form of symbolism but visually, it doesn't look too great. That, and the sign on the cross doesn't seem to be in relationship with the cross itself. Its angles are slightly off.
Besides that you show great layout and focal points.
The Idea of a somewhat modern christ is very nice, However it seems to stick out from the picture. As if it didn't belong. Maybe it's a form of symbolism but visually, it doesn't look too great. That, and the sign on the cross doesn't seem to be in relationship with the cross itself. Its angles are slightly off.
Besides that you show great layout and focal points.
I really love tha modern jesus. alot.